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Hello Ms. NicolaJH, How are you? I appreciate your great advice! Thanks to you, this lesson was very fruitful. Have a nice week.
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Dear NicolaJH I really appreciate your message. I’m always looking forward to your advice. You are kind enough to revise my diary to appropriate sentence. it’s extremely helpful for my quest and it’s for useful to write a next time diary as well.
Hello,NicolaJH. It's nice to see you here again. Thank you for the corrections you made on my essay. All the revisions make a perfect sense to me. I like gorillas, because they have many similarities with us. I love to take photo of gorillas at zoo. It's about a decade ago when I visit the Sendai Yagiyama zoo. There was only one gorilla whose name was Done.He lives alone. I stayed in front of his enclosure to take his photo. In the beginning, he laid down inside his small house, seemingly he tried to avoid my camera. But an hour later he came out and exhibited performances, like clapping hands, eating an orange. I noticed he looked at me while the performances. I think he admitted me to be a friend. It's a nice day with a beautiful blue sky and brisk air here today. Have a nice one, too. Bye for now. Yoko
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