

Thank you for correcting my mistakes in my text, and thank you for teaching me proper usage of the words!

Hello, MrsB. How are you ? It's nice to see you here again, and thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. Also, you wrote me the explanations for the amendment, thank you. It's very tricky and confusing to write these words in a right order, "play more video games" "healthy development of their social skills". There was a shocking news last week. Ex prime minister Shinzo Abe was shot to death while he was making a speech on the street in Nara city. People blame the security guards who were supposed to protect him, because the killer shot him only three meters behind. It is interesting that many people say he was a good person and a great prime minister, although they said about him differently before. Anyway, I can't believe such a terrible thing happened in my country. Stay safe in many ways Bye for now. Yoko

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Thank you for correcting my mistake in my text. I understand that the countable noun needs an article, I'll make sure it, from now.

Hello Ms. MrsB, Your explanation is very easy to understand and helpful for me. I am grateful for your advice!

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Thanks for reviewing my writing! Taking your advice, I am going to practice expressions in English more and more. See you someday!

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Thank you for correcting mistakes in my text. Your explanation is clear and easy to understand!