
Your correction helps me to write more natural English.

Thank you. I will keep writing.

Dear Senken Thank you. I wrote down to my note. Koremura

Dear Senken Thank you. It was what I wanted to say. Nice correction. Koremura

Dear Senken Thank you. It was a nice topics. Koremura

Thank you for your edition. I wonder whether the phrase “In the vase” in the first sentence is OK as I think it is OK because another teacher accepted it.

Dear Senken Thank you. I wrote down this correction to my note book. I will review it. Koremura

Dear Senken Thank you. You translated what I want to mention. It was a beautifl correction. Koremura

Dear Senken Thnk you. I will review again. Koremura

Thank you for your kind advice.

Dear Senken Thank you. You are great translator of broken English person. Koremura

Dear Senken Thank you. The last sentence, I wanted to say is "The cashless system and faith in god are mutually exclusive." This is just my opinion. Koremura

Thank you very much. I want to use the word plastic in the future.

Dear Senken Thank you for you intelligent correction. Koremura

Thank you for your encouragement.