Hello Mx. Cressy, I appreciate your advice!
Thank you for your feedback. Your suggestion is very useful!
Hello, Mx. Cressy, A Happy New Year! I appreciate your advice!
I apologize for the late reply. I’m grateful for your excellent suggestions and corrections. I learned a lot! I’m looking forward to taking your lesson again.
Hi again. I learned again quite a lot from your corrections, suggestions and comments. I am looking forward to getting your lecture again soon.
Hello Mx. Cressy, This your explanation was also very helpful for me. I appreciate your advice!
Thank you for your corrections. I'd like to make my writing more natural.
Dear Mx. Cressy, Your explanation was very easy to understand and helpful as always. I appreciate your advice!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned that "to feel bad" is generally used for an emotional state. I will use it properly in my future sentence. According to the 2nd sentence, I learned "time goes on" is right to say. According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the difference between "catch a cold" and "catch cold." Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd & 3rd sentence, I learned how to use the dash (-). I will use it properly in my future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned that I should have used "very" or "really" before "interested." I also learned how to use the word "contents." I will use them correctly in my future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the phrase "a bit of a temperature." I will use it in the next chance. According to the 3rd sentence, I learned that there was no need to put "on" before "this weekend." I will use it correctly in my future diary entries. Best regards.
Dear Cressy, Thank you for your advice. I believe it must be helpful for me to make English essays more correctly. I’m looking forward to working with you again. Sincerely, goldenrod69104
Dear Teacher Cressy san Thank you very much for your kind corrections with various alternatives. I'm very happy when I read your kind sentence: "You have used impressively fluent vocabulary and some excellent sentence structures which native speakers would use." >"once there was evidence that Columbus was not the first man to find the New World, should we still see him as its discoverer?' = I prefer this sentence because 'evidence' sounds to me more objective and mature. >'It's getting too late, I'm calling it' - meaning I'm making the decision now This is used in a medical scenarios when doctors decide to stop trying to save someone because they are clearly dead 'I'm calling it. Time of death 0400' = This is new to me. >'Let's call it quits' - let's finish and move on = This is quite new to me. I looked it up in the dictionary, which says "to agree that an argument is settled'. I see. >'should he be named' >'should he be celebrated' >'should he be known as' = I see. 'celebrate' is OK too. >The way I see it, the answer is 'Yes', because history is a cultural narrative. = I like this due to being more concise. >'Part of me wants to know why he left' >'Part of the reason I am leaving is because the work is not stimulating enough' >'He said that part of the problem is very long working hours' = I see how to use 'part'. >Therefore, once a story has been created, inherited down through generations and has come to form a important part of culture, then we should admit and respect it as history. = I see "inherited down through generations" It will be too long further. Please let me quit because I've got to a good place to leave off. Thank you again. Best, ie1133 \\\\\\\\\\
Thank you so much for your help. I’ll try harder to be better at my English!
