Thank you for the feedback. I will revise it to improve my writings. Tomoo
Hello, Stu. How are you doing? Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. My late father relied on health support supplements, and he took a several kinds of pills and tablets every day. As he was afraid of a shortage of them at the store, he bought too much at a time. I thought that such supplements have a lucrative market among elderly people. People become weak when they get old. they only try an easy and seemingly quick way. I hope I will not become like them. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you for correction it. It was very easy to understand. I learned a lot!
Thank you for correction it. It was very easy to understand. I learned a lot!
I apologize for the late reply. I’m grateful for your corrections. I’m looking forward to taking your lesson again!
Thank you for your feedback. I found it very helpful to identify where to improve. Tomoo
Thank you for your correcting. It is really helpful!
Thank you very much.
Thank you for your feedback and corrections. I will revise them. Tomoo
Thank you!
Thank you very much for coaching me, Yuichi
Thank you very much for coaching me, Yuichi
Thank you for your kind correction and comment.
Thank you for your kind correction and comment.
Thank you so much for your correction and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned that we can use the preposition "with" to express "by using." I will use it properly in the future diary entries. Best regards.
