Hello, thank you fir your feedback. It helped me a lot to learn natural writing. Tomoyo
Dear NicolaJH sensei, Thank you very much for your corrections. You revised my writing in very nice way. I enjoyed reading it. I will practice the sentences which you gave me later! Best regards, Hitomi
Hello Nicola, How are you today? I am good, thank you. It has been a month since I started IDIY as my daily work. Thank you very much for your daily support and heartwarming messages. I am very lucky to have you as my teacher. I am learning a lot from you and I think my writing skill has been improved. I am motivated and encouraged, and I would like to continue for another month! Best regards Rika
Dear Nicola JH sensei, Thank you very much for your review! My description became more natural thanks to you! I That was strange weather in your place. It is nice to hear that you like miso soup. I like drinking miso soup too! I often drink it in the morning. I also drink black tea with ginger syrop to warm me up when it is very cold. Please keep warm and have a good evening. Best regards, Hitomi
Thank you for your quick reply. I appreciate your kind advice which gave me a big incentive!
Not too bad,actually I need to stay at home almost all day long! Thank you for your feedback. It’s really an interesting item to work on! Tomoo
Dear NicolaJH I would like to thank you for checking my text. Your comments are really helpful for me. I will ask you to review my writing again soon. Kind regards, Shimabu2020
Dear NicolaJH Thank you for your reply. I’m sorry yhat I forgot to wrote a message above. As usual, I appreciate for your help make my English well. Use ‘on’ when I ride something and ‘past perfect tense’ are understandable. Thank you. I’m looking forward to take a lesson with you again. Best wishes Hiro
Dear Nicola JH sensei, Thank you very much for your review! You have changed my diary to like a novel. It is really helpful! I wish you enjoy reading new books! Please take care. Best wishes, Hitomi
Dear Nicola JH sensei, Thank you very much for your correction. It sounds really natural. I appreciate about it! I am glad that you had a lovely day. Yes, the harp is Koto. I got it from my grandmother. I am practicing it to play it for my grandmother. I think that flute is an elegant instrument. I like its beautiful sounds! I would like to play Koto for many years like you! Please take care, Hitomi
Dear Nicola, It became my daily routine to write an essay and learn from your feedback. I am enjoying it very much and I am very grateful for your support! Best regards, Rika
Dear NicolaJH sensei, Thank you very much for your corrections. I am sorry that you cannot eat takeaway food now. But I think it will be the same in Japan, because Tokyo governor also requests people to stop their businesses. I would like to see some of the different planets, too! But I am not brave enough so I feel it is scary that traveling to outer space is still not safe. Please stay warm and have a good evening! Best wishes, Hitomi
Dear NicolaJH sensei, Thank you very much for your corrections and very very kind and thoughtful reply! I'm really touched. I would like to keep smiling. I learned new words from you. It is always nice to get feed back from you! Please take care and have a nice day! Hitomi
Hello Nicola, I am grateful for your daily support very much. It has been more than three weeks since I have started and I have been learning a lot from your feedback. Also it is very helpful that you reply to me within 24 hrs. It makes me possible to do this work as daily task. I am very motivated to continue IDIY work thanks to you! Best regards, Rika
Thank you so much for your correction. The alternative sentences are very helpful!
