Hello Peter Thank you for your review. I confess, I used to using similar sentences to my work. You advised me about not starting with conjunctions the last time, but I forgot to do it at this time. I will not make the mistake from now on. Please continue to support me. Kind regards, YM
Dear Teacher Peter, Thank you very much for your review. Some expressions I learned from this entry are; - blood "flow" instead of "current" - in a sitting position - maintain a good health Have a good weekend. Warm regards, Haruka
Dear Teacher Peter, Thank you very much for your review. Regarding the example in the first paragraph, I originally wrote "a man" in place of "a person" in the fifth sentence. Then during my self-review, I realized women can act crazy as you suggested but overlooked that bit in the sixth sentence. My mistake! I will let you know about my latest score, once it becomes available by Thursday. Warm regards, Haruka
It's a big progress if I became able to write English even if it's just a little. I really appreciate it.
My writing has improved thanks to your corrections carefully. I will do my best. Thank you very much.
I finally began to understand that simple is the best. I will do my best! Thank you very much.
Dear Peter, Thank you for your advice. Have a nice weekend!
Dear Peter, Thank you for your helpful feedback. Regards, JUNn
Thank you for checking my essay. I have often missed Grammarly and Word choice. I can learn a lot of things from your correction. Kurumayu
Dear Peter, Thank you for checking and correcting my work. I will review it. Best regards, MochiHamu
I think English is difficult but fun. Thank you very much.
Your corrections are very imformative for me. Thank you.
Dear Peter Thank you for your correction. Your advice is very useful to me. Best regards, kegocchi
Your sentences represented what I really want to say. Thank you very much.
Thank you very much. I will watch out for careless mistakes.
