Hi Nicola, I saw a news article about the result of this voting. The average score the mayor received was 62.7 point, and this decided the retirement allowance as approx. 13 million yen.
Thank you, Nicola, for detailed review and comments as always. After lengthy summer, we finally enjoy pleasant autumn. Your comment reminded me of my trip to New Zealand six years ago just around this time of the year. It was interesting to see Christmas trees in warm weather ^^
Hi Nicola, Thank you for review and detailed comment. I'm so glad that I was able to learn a lot through this short composition !
Thank you so much for your revision. It made my writing more understandable. Also your advice are very useful. Thank you again for your help.
Dear NicolaJH, Hello again, The sentences you wrote me were wonderful! I really like them. You changed the order of the clauses and added new words and precisely describe what I meant to say. Beautiful works! Thank you. In the comment you wrote "Your text was very clear in meaning and easy to understand." That's great, that's the goal of my English study. We have an autumn festival in my town. It's a good opportunity to have a fun chatting with people who live in the same neighborhood. Notably, elderly people look so happy. Maybe, that's what a festival is for. Take care and see you next time. Yoko
She always carefully corrects my work, and her explanations are very clear and easy to understand, which is extremely helpful.
Hello, NicolaJH, How are you? You checked my writing and pointed out the mistakes, Thank you. My mother, she is 92, can't remember things. This morning she called me to ask if I had called her a minute ago as she couldn't answer it. Half an hour later, I called her and asked if the caller called her again. She didn't remember anything about that. Doctor said that she doesn't suffer Alzheimer's disease, just has an aging problem which isn't curable. I feel sad. Sorry to write such a sad story. I want to tell it to ease my feeling. Take care and see you next time. Bye for now. Yoko
Dear NicolaJH, Thank you for your helpful corrections! I'll do my best again! Best regards, Cheesemaru
Dear NicolaJH, Thank you for your corrections and coment! I'll do my best again! Bestwishes, Cheesemaru
Hello, NicolaJH, How are you doing? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. I'm happy to read your nice comments. Your corrections all make perfect sense to me. I will see you again the next time I come back to IDIY. Take care! Kind regards, Yoko
Thanks for offering an alternative sentence.It’s very helpful.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Dear Nicola, Thank you for your message, and correcting my English. I enjoyed reading your message. I'll make sure to review what I learned this time. Have a great day, Nakle88
Thank you, as always.
