Dear TeacherM, Thank you for reviewing this email as well. Thanks to you, it has transformed into a heartfelt, concrete, and persuasive message. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan
Dear TeacherM, Thank you for your careful proofreading. While none of the errors completely changed the meaning of the text, there were several minor mistakes, so I realized I need to be more careful. Seeing the corrections you made, I understood that simply changing an article can sometimes make the meaning clearer. I would appreciate your proofreading again. Best regards, Ton-chan
Dear TeacherM, Thank you so much for your meticulous proofreading down to the smallest detail. When English learners write emails in English, they often focus so much on translating from their native language that they forget to include information they would naturally include when writing in their native language. The content that learners find difficult to include in emails is often not crucial information, but rather elements that make the message clearer or give the recipient a more polite impression. Your corrections not only fill in these gaps that learners struggle to include, but also show how to express them using refined phrasing, making them extremely helpful. I am looking forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan
Dear TeacherM, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial, and in particular, what I couldn't point out the man will start the fourth grade. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear TeacherM, Thank you again for your meticulous proofreading, paying attention to even the smallest details. I apologize for sending a generic greeting instead of a personalized message when requesting your proofreading services. Not only your editing comments, but also your explanations of why corrections were necessary will serve as a valuable reference for my future emails. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan
Dear TeacherM, Thank you so much for your very thorough corrections. When English learners like me write emails, they often end up as a mere list of information points, lacking smooth transitions between sentences. However, the sentences you added made the flow between sentences smoother and refined my email into polished writing—it was very helpful! I would definitely like to request your corrections again. Thank you again for your help. Sincerely, Ton-chan
たまにスペルミスがある。
Dear TeacherM, Thank you again for your thoughtful feedback. Your comments provided many valuable insights that will help me avoid unintentionally causing discomfort to readers or leading to unintended consequences in my emails. I would very much like to request your help in proofreading my email again. Best regards, Ton-chan
Thank you for correcting my writing and giving detailed explanation. Everything makes sense and I learned a lot from your message.
Dear Teacher M-san, Thank you very much for your corrections. The sentences you added to my writing have helped me understand how to construct sentences naturally, and I am very grateful for this. I look forward to reading your comments in the near future. Thank you again. Best regards, Ton-chan
Dear TeacherM, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear TeacherM, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Hello TeacherM-san, Thank you very much for your very thorough corrections and explanations. Your explanations gave me very clear suggestions as to why the English text should be corrected in that way. I hope you will proofread my emails again. Thank you, Ton-chan
