Dear Teacher Felix, Sorry for late reply. It has been passed several month since you correcting my diary. I realy thank to you for correcting my diary and let better them. I am quite busy now so I haven't been able to do anything about English. I hope I could come back here soon. :) Mayuka
Hi Felix, Thank you for correcting this essay. Umm, using quatations is surely effective, as you said. To do that, I'll have to make a lot of stocks of them. Expressing ideas is just like connecting an electric cable to anther. I'm not well connected though. Many thanks, Kaori
Dear Felix, Thank you very much for your reviewing and correcting my English. There were a lot of points I learned from your comments and corrections even in this short composition, like positioning of a phrase in a sentence or use of articles and prepositions. I would like to post my writing for your review again, but I now see that it is not so easy to find you available. It seems that I was really lucky that I could choose you as my first teacher. I look forward to the next chance you would review my writing. Best regards, Mamekanna
Thank you for your correction, Felix
Hi Felix, Thank you for revising this text. Especially, your correction for the last sentence clicked for me! Thank you also for understanding my intention. Many thanks as always, Kaori
Hi Felix, Thank you for correcting this essay. I didn't know that this question about Time (?) is philosophical. Your comment on this has inspired me to write another text. See you later! Many thanks as always, Kaori
Hi Felix, Thank you for correcting this essay. I was amazed as soon as I sent you another text, I found this correction! "Poverty-ridden slums!" I will absolutely use this phrase next time when I talk about poverty. Many thanks as always, Kaori
Hi Felix, Thank you for correcting this essay. In fact, I experienced quite a few creepy phenomena when I was young. As I told my family and friends this story tens of times, I'm used to narrating it. I know! It must be good practice to write more scary stories. Don't you think so? I will be able to learn participle constructions. Many thanks as always, Kaori
Hi Felix, Thank you for correcting this essay. I do want to be picky about grammar and words. This makes me easier to express my ideas as well as to understand other people's feelings. Thank you for teaching me the subtle differences between "might" and "may." And I like the corrected last sentence - it looks even gorgeous! Have a lovely Sunday! Many thanks, Kaori
Hi Felix, Wow! Thank you for having correcting this essay to be cool. You're such a great writer! I'm a great fan of figurative expressions, because I like storytelling a lot. I will be challenging to describe better in English pictures in my mind. Many thanks as always, Kaori
Hi Felix, Thank you for reviewing this take and suggesting the new expressions such as "take by surprise" and "think outside the box." These are inspiring and thought-provoking. I hope I will be able to widen my horizons too! Many thanks as always, Kaori
Thanks you for your advice. I understand it is better to convince short sentences into a natural flowing sentence so that it sounds more natural.
Hi Felix, Thank you for correctig this essay to be natural. A boiler! Yes, it is. I couldn't remember the word when I wrote this text. By your corrections I was able to learn quite a few helpful expressions such as "achieve maximum velocity." Many thanks as always, Kaori
Hi Felix, Thank you for correcting this essay. This interview reminded me of the importance of practicing without a fret. Don't worry but practice! Many thanks as always, Kaori
Hi Felix, Thank you for revising this take. Yes. I'll keep up the good work to write more natural English. Many thanks as always, Kaori