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Dear Roo90 I see, you wrote "although there is a chemical reaction in our brain when we feel excited it is not the brain itself that feels the emotion." Our brain receives signals and is reacted by them. So, I'm wondering where do our emotions and excitements come from? What makes us feel something? A beautiful picture in this case is just a trigger. Thank you for the revises you gave me. Notably, the 3rd line, "because they already know the painting has been authenticated by the museum." helps my English study. The tense and the word, "authenticate", are good to know for me. Take care and see you next time. Yoko
Hello, Roo90, how are you? I always like the corrections and the choice of word you demonstrate to me. The word, "altered" is nicer than "damaged" in this context. You gave me an interesting expression, " at the end of the day" which means "after all", thank you. Take care and see you next time. Yoko
Hello, Roo90 How are you? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. Your corrections all make perfect sense to me as always. I'm happy to read your nice comments, too. I am looking forward to seeing you the next time I come back to IDIY. Take care! Yoko
Hello, Roo90 How are you? It's nice to hear from you again. Thank you for the corrections you made on my submission. You kindly responded quickly so as to make me study the mistakes in the submission while my memories are fresh. Also your nice comments make me very happy, thank you. This time, in the 4th sentence I made a challenge, hoping it makes sense, then, you say it's OK. I'm extremely happy! You wrote "There's a lot of talk and not much action!" That's absolutely true! I knew you got what I meant to say in this essay. After this submission, I will have a break and come back a while later. I hope to see you then. Bye for now, Yoko
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Dear Roo90 How are you doing? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. Your corrections all make a perfect sense to me. Especially, the first line, you gave me a beautiful one. "and I especially like that they don't release the cases they've charged to the public." Actually I tried to write this part again and again.... but I couldn't find a good one... "the cases they've charged" that's a phrase I wanted to write. You solved the puzzle! I feel good. Thank you. It's Christmas. I'm listening to a nice Christmas song from radio. I hope you will have a wonderful winter holiday, too. Bye for now, until I see you next time. Yoko
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Hello, Roo90 How are you doing? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. I'm happy to read your nice comments. Your corrections all make perfect sense to me. Especially, the expression "middle ground" in the last sentence sounds impressive . I hope you have an enjoyable day. Take care! Kind regards, Yoko
Dear Roo90, I appreciate your advice! Have a wonderful weekend. Mashroom
