Dear JodiT, I appreciate your advice. Have a nice Sunday. Best regards, Mashroom
Thank your for your kindly feedback.
Thank you for your feedback. It was easy to follow and helpful! I will include my thoughts in future essays.
Dear JodiT, I appreciate your advice! Have a nice week. Best regards, Mashroom
Dear JodiT san Thank you for your informative and inspiring corrections. First of all, I feel ashamed to have made a lot of spelling mistakes. I edit my sentences using a small display of my cellphone, with my eyes deteriorating with age. I will be more careful. " The topic sentence can be a great place to provide a brief explanation......" =I see. I will try to write my first sentence with not only an answer to the question, but also some more explanation why I think so. "~~~ adding the indefinite article "a" clarifies that you're referring to a specific degree or amount~~~" =I see. " Specific " is important. "~~~ "the more [noun]" is commonly used to express an increase in quantity or degree, and it doesn't typically take a plural form." = I see. Proportion of one thing doesn't meet with a plural form. "~~~interrupts the flow of the sentence! It splits the main idea,~~~" = Thank you for suggesting about the sentence flow as well as other fandamental rules. "The use of the first person (I, me, my) is the first time I've seen it in your paragraph! " =I see the impact of using the first person. Prompt questions come next. And I may write more about my cooking, which I hope could interest readers. Best regards,
