Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the preposition "at." I will use it properly in my future diary entries. According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the difference between "to raise" and "to rise." I will use each of them correctly. Best regards.
Thank you for your review of my dairy! I am impressed by your precise correction and the variety of your rephases.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned how to use a dash. I will use it properly in my future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the phrase "to have drinks" and "drinks party" are more common to be used by native speakers. I will use these phrases in my future diary entries. According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the difference between "new" and "newly." Best regards.