Dear Jelena, Thank you for checking my short essay. I will review your feedback and keep practicing. I also hope things get back to normal soon. Kind regards,
Dear Jenla, Thank you so much for your detailed instruction. I really learned a lot from your review. Best regards, Yusi
Thank you for your good corrections and kind message! It was a good training.
Thank you very much for your kind explanations.
Thank you so much for your correction!! Your correction has helped me a lot!
Dear Jenla, Thank you for your attaching 'reply message'. It is also very helpful for me. Regards, Jun
Thank you for teaching me kindly. It has nothing to do with this, but you said ' don't check my geography', so I googled the places such as caernarfon, porthmadog, and Llanfairfechan!! hahaha They are unfamiliar names to me, and it looks like it does't belong to England, so I was just a curious. I enjoyed looking some images in these areas thank to you. They look beautiful. See you next time.
Thank you for correcting my English. Im looking forward to this again with you.
Dear Jenla, Thank you for the good feedback and alternative. Your comment is really useful, especially use of verbs,e.g. committed and eager. It's very easy to understand. I'll acquire these good expressions. Thank you for next time! Yours Sincerely
Thank you for teaching me kindly. I found an interesting thing when I read your correction. Forgive me if I am wrong. In the photo, in my eyes, the woman looks irritated at him and she looks mean. You might not have felt as the same as me, so it doesn't make sense my sentence---'she is looking down on him'. After reading your feedback, I took a look at the photo again. And then, It looked different. she looks kind and it looks like she is feeling pity for him!! I think that's because it's only her profile, we hardly see her facial expression totally. Anyway, it was an interesting discover. See you next time. Best regards
Thank you a lot Jenla. But, one thing. The conclusion was to the opposite direction of what I really meant. I meant "Now, the problem is, if girls abandoned fancying on boys, would it be much better for them? No, I don't think so. If girls were to avoid choosing clothes etc., they definitely would lose their peaceful time that otherwise had been theirs".
I appreciated your kind corrections. It was a very good training!
Thank you for your corrections! I enjoyed this lesson.
Dear Ms Jenla, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback! Your corrections and suggestions were very detailed, so I understand very well what kind of expressions are suitable and natural! Thank you very much also for letting me know new words and expressions! Have a lovely weekend!
