Dear Ms Jenla, Thank you very much for your corrections and many tips for making my writing more natural! I will use those techniques in future writings.
Thank you for your correction. When it comes to England, I think football is much more popular than baseball. Though football is also popular in japan and there are lots of football fans, I don’t really know about the rule of football. But I learned how to describe this photo in English! See you next time!
Thank you for your comments and corrections. I made the same mistake to use "those who." I'll keep on making efforts to improve. Thank you!!
Thank you for your helpful comments! Your detailed explanation about "should be needed" is of use to me!!
Dear Mr/Ms Jenla Thank you for your feedback. Your explanations and suggestions were really helpful. Thank you for teaching me new words. I have never used ‘fluffy’. I liked it because it sounds lovely, soft and light. I also learnt the difference between ‘somehow’ and ‘somewhat’ thanks to your explanations. I wrote about the time because one of the hints asked, ‘what time does the clock say’. I have poor eyesight, so it was hard for me, too! Best wishes
Thank you!
Dear Jenla. Thank you to correct my sentences. I appliciate to your correction! Thank you Yellow12406
Thank you very much for your detailed review. Your description and logical feedback make sense to me.
Thank you for your very useful advice!
Thank you for your correction. I am not good at using prepositions, so it was a great experience for me to be corrected sentence by sentence. I also thank you for your alternative sentences.
Your correction and advice are very useful for me. Thank you so much!
Thank you for your reading and corrections! It was a great lesson for me.
Thank you so much for your time. Your correction and comment are very useful. Let me submit other essays.
Thank you for your helpful comments and suggestions every time.
Dear Jenla, Wonderful, wonderful constractive feedback, Jenla. Thank you very much, indeed. Kind regards, Mina
