It was good training for me and I enjoyed this topic. Thank you for your helpful advice!
Thank you for your correction.
I learned a lot from your comments.
There are several phrasal verbs and phrases that is new to me, such as "pent up."
I learned a lot of words and phrases like shorts, foreground, up high, elevated, ... which I didn't know.
Thank you so much.
Thank you for your advice.
I noticed the mistake after I had sent my manuscript.
I need to be more careful in order not to be notified of a mistake.
Thank you for your comments.
They’re very helpful for me.
I try to study collocations!
Thank you for reading my short essay! The sentences you advised is very helpful.